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Source:  http://images.wikia.com/disney/images/0/0d/Mulan_Screenshot.jpg

I. Activating Prior Knowledge
Have you ever seen the Disney movie, Mulan? It is a story about a young girl who dresses as a boy to take her father's place in the Chinese army in their fight against the Xiongnu. The movie is based on the poem, The Poem of Mulan.

II.  Setting A Purpose for Reading
As you read the poem, compare it to your knowledge of the movie, Mulan. How are they similar? How are they different? If you have not seen the movie, take a few moments to do an internet search for a summary of the movie.

III.  Reading the Text (Read, Re-Read, and Read Again)

The Poem of Mulan

Tsiek tsiek and again tsiek tsiek,
Mu-lan weaves, facing the door.
You don’t hear the shuttle’s sound,
You only hear Daughter’s sighs.
They ask Daughter who’s in her heart,
They ask Daughter who’s on her mind.
“No one is in Daughter’s heart,
No one is on Daughter’s mind.
Last night I saw the draft posters,
The Khan [Emperor] is calling many troops,
The army list is in twelve scrolls,
On every scroll there’s Father’s name.
Father has no grown-up son,
Mu-lan has no elder brother.
I want to buy a saddle and a horse,
And serve in the army in Father’s place.

STOP! Can you answer this question? If not, go back and re-read the passage.
Which line contains an onomatopoeia? Summarize the first stanza of the poem in your own words.


At dawn she takes leave of the Yellow River,
In the evening she arrives at Black Mountain.
She doesn’t hear the sound of Father and Mother calling,
She only hears Mount Yen’s nomad horses cry tsiu tsiu.
She goes ten thousand miles on the business of war,
She crosses passes and mountains like flying.
Northern gusts carry the rattle of army pots,
Chilly light shines on iron armor.
Generals die in a hundred battles,
Stout soldiers return after ten years.

STOP! Can you answer this question? If not, go back and re-read the passage.
Find two examples of sensory language in the poem. Summarize the second stanza of the poem in your own words.


On her return she sees the Son of Heaven [Emperor]
The Son of Heaven sits in the Splendid Hall.
He gives out promotions in twelve ranks
And prizes of a hundred thousand and more.
The Khan asks her what she desires.
“Mu-lan has no use for a minister’s post.
I wish to ride a swift mount
To take me back to my home.”

STOP! Can you answer this question? If not, go back and re-read the passage.
Was the military action successful? What evidence supports your response?Prediction:  Why does Mulan wish to return home?


When Father and Mother hear Daughter is coming
They go outside the wall to meet her, leaning on each other.
When Elder Sister hears Younger Sister is coming
She fixes her rouge, facing the door.
When Little Brother hears Elder sister is coming
He whets the knife, quick quick, for pig and sheep.
“I open the door to my east chamber,
I sit on my couch in the west room,
I take off my wartime gown
And put on my old-time clothes.”
Facing the window she fixes her cloudlike hair,
Hanging up a mirror she dabs on yellow flower-powder.
She goes out the door and sees her comrades.
Her comrades are all amazed and perplexed.
Traveling together for twelve years
They didn’t know Mu-lan was a girl.

STOP! Can you answer this question? If not, go back and re-read the passage.
Which lines describe Mulan's transformation from warrior to woman? How might the soldiers have reacted to this transformation?



Source: “The Poem of Mulan,” in The Flowering Plum and the Palace Lady: Interpretations of Chinese Poetry, trans. Hans H. Frankel (New Haven: Yale UP, 1976), 68-70.

Source: 
http://worldhistoryforusall.sdsu.edu/eras/era5.php

The Story of Mulan first appeared during the later Tang Dynasty, but her story reflects the long history of nearly continuous military struggles against the nomadic Xiongnu, who lived on China’s northern borders. The Han dynasty was able to keep the Xiongnu at bay for several hundred years through a combination of military defense and simple bribery. (Han officials found that it was cheaper to pay the Xiongnu to refrain from attacking than to fight them.) But the uneasy truce between the Han and the Xiongnu began to unravel around 50 CE. This crisis, in concert with many others, helped bring down the Han.

IV. Personal Reflection – Respond to the following question in your blog. Be sure to include a quote from the text to support your response.

Response:  How did Chinese emperors obtain soldiers for their armies? Was this an effective policy? Give reasons to support your response.

V. Peer Reflection - Read three classmates’ response and respond to what they have written. 
sebastian.c.elv3
8/28/2012 06:55:47 am

The emporer made draft posters and scrolls with people's names on them. Yes because people came to fight in the army.

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reb.c.elv2
8/29/2012 05:18:42 am

Yes I agree with you because the men would go and fight whether they liked it or not.

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Bryan.G.Elv1
8/30/2012 05:56:19 am

I disagree with you because none of them went through training and they would have gotten beaten realy easy.

Austin.Wease.3
9/4/2012 05:19:01 am

I disagree with you because back then they wanted to fight for their country. But your right they had to fight no matter what. They won the fight becuse it says the emperor gave them gifts. They wouldnt get gifts if they lost so even though they didnt have training they must have been skilled in fighting.

ivonne Lopez
9/4/2012 08:42:06 am

Thats true

shanteka
9/5/2012 06:42:35 am

i agree with you because some peoplewould go fight back wheather th epeople like it or if the girl /boy doesnt like it

9/7/2012 02:51:52 pm

I agree.

richard 3b
9/25/2012 09:30:06 am

they might have got gifts but is a gift worth the risk of dying i dont think so and if they lost the war what would happen they all just go home they would have to fight longer harder do more work.

dem.j.elv3-4
8/29/2012 05:49:20 am

i agree with you because the twelve scrolls does have the army list on it

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richard 3b
9/25/2012 09:27:32 am

but girls couldnt fight in wars only men oldest sons or father and they couldnt do anything about it because the rulers would send gaurds to pull you there and or put you in jail burn ur house

andrea.o.elv1
8/29/2012 06:33:34 am

I agree with that.

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8/29/2012 07:22:19 am

I feel that the army could have a better way to choose their soldiers.

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Z'naria.G.Elv6
9/3/2012 10:09:21 am

I agree with what u said Kyla.

Laura.M.Elv1
9/4/2012 07:38:29 am

i agree with you i think they should've looked for the younger people in the country

Autumn Walker
9/4/2012 08:32:58 am

I Disagree with you

noahlinton.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 08:58:48 am

i agree i think they could have better ways to do it

X@VIER sloan
9/4/2012 09:17:56 am

i agree with u i hate to addmit this but girl are a lil smarter than boys so the army would be more succecful with girls

Emily.S.Elv6
9/4/2012 10:54:51 am

I agree. I think they should have chose the younger ones so the older ones wouldnt have to go.......They have less chance i think because they are not as strong....

Elvington 9/5/12
9/5/2012 05:10:55 am

Kyla, you did not describe how the soldiers were selected. Folks, you need to make sure that you answer the question for yourself and then respond to your classmates comments.

Elvington 9/5/12
9/5/2012 05:15:33 am

Xavier, I just read your comment and on the one hand, I appreciate the sentiment that girls are smarter than boys. On the other hand, I know that this is not true. Maybe girls just mature more quickly and appear to be more rational at this point in your life.

Avery L.
9/5/2012 10:51:21 am

I agree with that too.

Jessica Greer
9/6/2012 06:14:58 am

I agree with you because it's unfair to choose with a scroll.

Ozzie Rodriguez
9/10/2012 01:39:04 am

I disagree with you. I cant think of any other good ways

stephen.p.elv.6
9/25/2012 06:16:56 am

Yes, i agree. The army could have choosen the soilders a different way. After they listed the fathers name, and if there was no one else, as in Mulans situation, daughters should be giving the opportunity.

deonte.h.elv3
9/27/2012 11:23:28 am

i think so kyla the soldiers have no exp

Joseph.M.elv12
8/29/2012 07:37:00 am

I agree with the scrolls part but I don't say that being forced into the army is a "effective." way to pick their soldiers.

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dem.j.elv3-4
8/29/2012 07:59:32 am

i thank thats right thay should have had a better way to see who goes to the army and who dosent

ryanokelly.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 10:36:52 am

i agree too because there were better way and different was too.

Elvington 9/5/12
9/5/2012 05:13:25 am

Why do you believe that forcing people to serve is ineffective? If everyone had to serve time in the military, would that not be more fair and effective? Just wondering what your thoughts are?

deonte.h.elv3
9/27/2012 11:26:23 am

yes me to joseph

Tanasia.M.Elvi
9/1/2012 01:17:16 am

im not getting what ur saying so could you get a little more information

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Z'naria.G.Elv6
9/3/2012 10:08:27 am

I agree!

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kyle
9/4/2012 06:19:05 am

I agree

deonte.h.elv3
9/27/2012 11:25:19 am

yes i do to !

elisa.mar.elv.3
9/3/2012 11:31:27 am

i somewhat agree with what u said..the people didnt come to fight in the army willingly

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Jessica greer
9/6/2012 06:07:52 am

I agree with you because most of them didn't want to fight.

marie.h.elv3
9/4/2012 05:26:08 am

Sebastian i disagree with you they didnt have no training so they just did what the emperor told them to even if they didnt like it or not

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Tay.elv
9/4/2012 05:56:40 am

I agree because when you read it says the same thing

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kyle huneycutt
9/4/2012 06:14:55 am

I agree because it said in paragragh 1 that the empeorers had 12 scooles with peoples names.

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laura.m.elv1
9/4/2012 07:36:53 am

i agree with you cause what other way would he.?

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austin.wease.2
9/4/2012 07:37:10 am

yes i agree with you because they have to go if they are on the srolls

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Breyanna perry.weasehr.
9/4/2012 07:51:05 am

i really dont agree with you because i just think that theyve known these soldiersfrom preivous wars so they just picked them. and i agree with the yes part

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Autumn Walker
9/4/2012 08:31:55 am

I Disagree With You Because They Didnt Have Any Training.

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Ivonne Lopez
9/4/2012 08:40:59 am

i agree with you

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noahlinton.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 08:59:48 am

i agree but wheres your quote

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ryanokelly.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 10:32:52 am

yey i agree

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Emily.S.Elv6
9/4/2012 10:53:29 am

I agree with you

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Gabby.wease.5
9/5/2012 05:10:22 am

I agree with you.

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shanteka
9/5/2012 06:46:27 am

yeah i agree

Emilee
9/5/2012 05:30:47 am

The son automatically goes to war next but since Mulan does not have an older brother the dad would have had to go. Mulan did not want her dad to go to war so she went disguised as a man.

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Avery L.
9/5/2012 10:50:45 am

i agree with that, that also shows for the first part that some men could be sick and weak so if they got chosen they wouldnt do so good.

Ozzie Rodriguez
9/10/2012 01:39:47 am

I agree

stephen.p.elv.6
9/25/2012 06:27:36 am

The transformation of Mu-lan. "She goes out the door and sees her comrades" From woman to warrier. Her honor was when she steped up to fight when no one else could.

Emilee L.
9/5/2012 05:35:12 am

Austin, I agree with you because if the emperor gave them all gifts they would be getting a reward for winning not losing.

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9/7/2012 02:54:34 pm

I agree with you.

alexandra.p.wea3
9/5/2012 05:47:12 am

i agree with you

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Jessica Greer
9/6/2012 06:11:06 am

I disagree with you because most probably didn't want to.

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J3R3MY D@viz
9/27/2012 04:50:01 am

sendig out scrolls telling you your in the army

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J3ER3MY D@viz
9/27/2012 04:53:03 am

no it was not a good policy because what if the poeple were old or did not want to do it

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J3R3MY D@ivz
9/27/2012 04:56:35 am

i agree with sebastian because cause they had to fight no matter what

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9/17/2020 04:38:16 pm

i was asking a question from a test not from a person so shut the hell up before i come and fuck your ass.

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reb.c.elv2
8/29/2012 05:16:21 am

The Chinese would make draft posters and scrolls with the men's names on them. Yes, I think it was an effective way to draft men to fight because they would go and fight for China.

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andrea.o.elv1
8/29/2012 06:36:33 am

I agree because all the men had to fight back then.

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aliya.f.elv1
8/29/2012 06:55:45 am

i agree because the men would go and fight for china

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8/29/2012 07:16:07 am

I disagree because i think that the policy wasnt effective because Mulan fought in the war anyways

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Bryan.G.Elv
8/30/2012 05:59:50 am

I agree with you because the army would have gotten beaten realy easy because of no training.

elisa.mar.elv.3
9/3/2012 11:36:18 am

i totally agree that the policy was not effective women can do the same things men can mulan showed this

Elvington - 9/15/12
9/5/2012 05:36:35 am

Kyla, I agree with your opinion that the policy was ineffective because Mulan was able to become a soldier. But, what did she have to do to become a soldier? Is this something a woman should have to do in order to be a soldier, if being a soldier is what she wants to be?

kyla.r.elv1
8/29/2012 07:26:27 am

I felt as though Mulan's father way have been to old to fight in the war

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jarrod.k.elv1
9/3/2012 10:17:13 am

I agree that was why mulan went to fight

elisa.mar.elv.3
9/3/2012 11:38:38 am

i agree that mulans father was way too old and thats what pushed mulan to do the things she did so her father would not have to go into battle.

stephen.p.elv.6
9/25/2012 06:20:11 am

Yes Mulans father was to old to fight. The army should have an age cut off.

sebastian.c.elv3
8/29/2012 08:14:54 am

I agree it works but not completely because Mulan went in her fathers place.

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Alexis.Gra.Elv2
8/31/2012 05:08:32 am

I agree with everything that you said. I do think that it is a good way to pick people.

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kenji.l.elv
8/31/2012 05:14:24 am

that is true cause the army was to protect that's what i put on mine

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cristobal.sor.elv2
8/31/2012 05:45:48 am

good thought thats how they did it for a good amount of years but the fact is that it wasnt too fair if not at all

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jordan.h.elv3
9/2/2012 04:27:54 am

I agree that they got drafted instead of getting picked because it wouldn't be fair if they got forced to do something they didn't want to.

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Jada.b.elv3
9/3/2012 07:50:27 am

I agree with you. Their method of choosing men for the war was faster.

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avery.h.elv3
9/3/2012 08:25:55 am

I agree with you about it being effective because men didn't have a choice about going to fight if they were on the scrolls.

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marie.h.elv3
9/4/2012 05:30:03 am

Rebecca Didnt the poem say it had fathers name in it

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austin.wease.2
9/4/2012 07:40:02 am

i agree

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Autumn Walker
9/4/2012 08:35:56 am

I Agree

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Emily.S.Elv6
9/4/2012 10:56:31 am

I agree....Great Answer! :D

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9/7/2012 02:53:40 pm

I agree with Reb.C. It is an effective way to draft.

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dem.j.elv.3-4
8/29/2012 05:46:26 am

the chinese emperor had the twelve scrolls and on the scrolls is the army list

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aliya.f.elv1
8/29/2012 06:59:27 am

on the twelve scrolls is the army members' name

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dem.j.elv3-4
8/29/2012 07:56:33 am

i was thanking of the same thing

marie.h.elv3
9/4/2012 05:31:49 am

demetrie didnt it say it had fathers name on the scrolls

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Gabby.wease.5
9/5/2012 05:14:02 am

true.

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Ashley.T.elv6
8/29/2012 06:08:06 am

"The emporer makes the draft posters, the army list is in twelve scrolls" ------ "And serve in the army in Father’s place."

Yes, because if the father is too old to go to war a son will be able toread the srcoll and take his fathers place.

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andrea.o.elv1
8/29/2012 06:34:32 am

Thats what I was thinking.

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aliya.f.elv1
8/29/2012 06:57:34 am

me ,too

Joseph.M.elv12
8/29/2012 07:39:09 am

I agree with you.

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alex.b.elv6
8/29/2012 08:05:00 am

I agree that with your answer.

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reb.c.elv2
8/30/2012 06:55:40 am

I agree that she went and fought because she was afraid to loose her father and so she went and took his place in war.

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Brianna.g.elv.3
8/30/2012 11:14:26 am

I agree with you.

jarrod.k.elv1
9/3/2012 10:20:43 am

I had not thought about that before

marco.wease.3
9/4/2012 04:39:17 am

i disagree because the emperor doesnt know they'
re skills

Tanasia.M.Elvi
9/1/2012 01:19:41 am

I agree with your answer its is a good idea to use because the father is too old so its like he is passing it down

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jordan.h.elv3
9/2/2012 04:32:13 am

I agree with you that if the father is to old than his son could take his place as he reads the army scrolls and fight in the army.

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avery.h.elv3
9/3/2012 08:28:02 am

I like the way you included quotes to support your answer.

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Z'naria.G.Elv6
9/3/2012 10:10:35 am

Good answers!

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Austin.Wease.3
9/4/2012 05:26:21 am

I totally agree with waht you said there are 12 posters with her fathers name on all 12. But she doesn't want him to die so she takes his place. I liked the way you used your quote.

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Nancy.elv.3
9/4/2012 05:55:09 am

I agree with you Ashley

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Tay.elv
9/4/2012 06:00:40 am

I think your right because it will say that excact thing in the poem

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Breyannaperry.weasehr.
9/4/2012 07:46:58 am

i strongly agreewith you response i alsothought the same on my response NICE!!

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Elvington 9/5/12
9/5/2012 05:58:06 am

Excellent use of the quote to support your response. I wish more students were using quotes as opposed to simply writing - "I agree."

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Wease 9/7/12
9/7/2012 04:46:07 am

I am glad that students are reading each other's work, but simply saying "I agree" is not very effective. It would be a much more effective argument or conversation if we could know with what you agree or disagree.

andrea.o.elv1
8/29/2012 06:29:06 am

The emporer makes the draft posters, the army is in twelve scrolls.

Yes, because the father needs a son that was older than Mulan so he could take place?

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Ozzie Rodriguez
9/10/2012 01:41:16 am

I agree. They did use draft posters.

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aliya.f.elv1
8/29/2012 06:54:12 am

1. The Emperor made draft posters to get men for army and they picked one man from every family (Either the oldest son or the father if there is not an older son).
2a.Yes because the women could be left to have babies to carry on the family.
2b.No because maybe some of the women thought that they would be strong enough to fight in the army and/or the women wanted to fight to replace a family member so the other family member would not get killed

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jordan.h.elv3
9/2/2012 04:34:57 am

I agree that the women might fight if they don't won't the other getting hurt.

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Tay.elv
9/4/2012 05:59:05 am

I agree because if read the the story it will say the same thing

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Claudia
9/4/2012 06:49:27 am

I agree they picked one man from each family.

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8/29/2012 07:13:22 am

They had the army warriors by keeping their names on scrolls. A quote to support this from the poem is "The army lists is in twelve scrolls. No, I dont think that their policy was effective because Mulan went to war instead of her father.

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Joseph.M.elv12
8/29/2012 07:33:19 am

I never really thought of it being "effective" that way.

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alexis
8/31/2012 05:15:12 am

I agree with you totally. Because then you knew you had people

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kenji.l.elv
8/31/2012 05:18:26 am

i sort of agree with you cause there was scrolls that had the peoples names

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austin.wease.2
9/4/2012 07:33:14 am

yes i agree with you

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Joseph.M.elv12
8/29/2012 07:29:29 am

The Emperor had Twelve Scrolls and on the scrolls had the names of all the men that would be in the army. If not the father the oldest son would go into the army.
No. I don't think it was effective because your sex doesn't matter. Be male or female I think both should have be able to be in the army.

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alex.b.elv6
8/29/2012 08:06:36 am

I agree with that being male or female didn't matter if you wanted to join the army

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Alexis.Gra.Elv2
8/31/2012 05:12:43 am

I agree with you and have always felt that way.

alex.b.elv6
8/29/2012 08:02:50 am

The poem says on stanza 3 that the emperor would have twelve scrolls or draft posters that had the name of soldiers who would fight in the army. This was an effective policy because they might have been beaten or have been called a disgrace if the soldier had not wanted to serve in the army. Stanza 3 says, "He gives out promotions in twelve ranks," this supports my answer to the first question.

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Elvington - 9/5/12
9/5/2012 06:03:47 am

Alex, you bring up an interesting point. If a son or father refused to serve in the army, it brought great shame and disgrace to the family. So, in order to protect her father and avoid disgrace, Mulan dresses as a man and serves in her father's place. Now, let us look at this from another perspective. How did Mulan's father feel about his daughter taking his place? Do you think he felt any shame for this?

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Wease 9/7/12
9/7/2012 04:52:14 am

Since I am not a man, I do not know if my reaction would necessarily be trued for Mulan's father, but I can see two reactions happening. On the one hand, I might feel shame that my daughter felt the need to take my place. On the other hand, I might feel pride in the fact that my daughter was brave enough to do what she thought necessary to protect me. In either case I would also feel fear because of what might happen to my daughter.

Bryan.G.Elv1
8/30/2012 05:54:36 am

The emperor would have 12 scrolls or draft posters with people's names on it.
No I do not think this was a good idea. First because maybe some men didn't want to be soldiers and second because none of them went through training and would have gotten beaten easily.

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Randon.P.Elv
8/30/2012 08:46:27 am

The chinese obtained soldiers by having a list of people's names and they went out and got people.This was an effective policy because they made sure they had the soldiers.

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Brianna.g.elv.3
8/30/2012 11:12:37 am

The emperor been calling many troops. And have an army list that is in 12 scrolls, on every scroll there's Father's names listed. I think it was effective because it was quicker to choose people instead of going through all that trouble, trying to find people.

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kenji.l.elv
8/31/2012 05:10:53 am

oh yeah i also forgot that there was 12 scrolls and i liked how you explained it

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kenji.l.elv
8/31/2012 05:07:39 am

The emperor have a list of the soldier's names so they came and get them and it was effective policy cause they had them to protect because they had to go no matter what

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james.b.elv.6th
9/12/2012 05:01:38 am

I agree with you kenji

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james.b.elv.6
8/31/2012 05:08:34 am

The emperor has multiple scrolls to select the men of the army.

Yes, because the emperor has a son that can take his royal place and he can marry Mulan.

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Alexis.Gra.Elv2
8/31/2012 05:18:09 am

They would pick people to go in the army based off of twelve scrolls with everyone that they wanted to draft into the army on the scrolls. It was only men. I think it was a good idea because then you knew who was going into the army. She went because she did not want her father to die.

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avery.h.elv3
9/3/2012 08:22:39 am

I agree with all your answers and I like the way you worded them.

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Kendall Webster
9/4/2012 09:26:21 am

True

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cristobal.sor.elv2
8/31/2012 05:40:07 am

they simply just got signed up by the general or a leader of war but only males could fight war and you had no say if you didnt want to go or not so basicly they were froced to join.

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Tanasia.M.Elvi
9/1/2012 01:15:03 am

China's army had 12 scrolls with the names of the soliders
I think that it was a good is idea so that the people would know how many soldiers they had that they could use to make thier plans to win the war.

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jarrod.k.elv1
9/3/2012 10:24:02 am

I agree with you

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kyle
9/4/2012 06:20:59 am

I agree to.

jordan.h.elv3
9/2/2012 04:24:30 am

The Emperors had draft posters and scrolls with the men's names.
Yes, because if they came from the bay they would be ready to fight .

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ryne.d.elv1
9/2/2012 01:25:31 pm

1. Chinese emperors obtain soldiers for their armies by using the twelve scrolls which had the soldiers names on them. A quote from the poem is " The army list is in twelve scrolls".

2a. Yes because the women could take care of their babies.

2b. No because the women might want to fight, and they didn't want the men to die in the war

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Jada.B.Elv3
9/3/2012 07:45:29 am

The emperor called a lot of their troops. They had an army list 12 scrolls long. This took less time then trying to find people.

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avery.h.elv3
9/3/2012 08:19:51 am

The Chinese Emperors obtained men for their army by drafting or forcing men to be in the army even if they didn't want to be. I don't agree with forcing people to be in the army, but I think it is an effective strategy if enough men don't sign up because when you are told you have to be in the army or you're drafted you have to join. There is no other option if you want to remain in good terms with the government. This entire story is in an example of drafting working because Mu-lan went despite the fact nobody in her family wanted to go.

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Elvington - 9/5/12
9/5/2012 06:10:58 am

Avery, don't forget that the reason that they didn't want her to go was because she was a woman. It didn't matter if she were capable or not, it simply wasn't her place to take on this responsibility. How do you think people reacted when she returned home from serving in the military? How did other women look at her within the community? Do you think they talked about her behind her back instead of focusing on her accomplishments?

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Z'naria.G.Elv6
9/3/2012 10:07:02 am

- The emperor made a scroll with male names on them of who he wanted to fight in the war.

- Yes. Because the men had to leave their families and their family wouldnt have any more support and the kids could starve because their mother couldnt work or provide food for them.

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jarrod.k.elv1
9/3/2012 10:14:28 am

1. There was draft posters and the army list is in 12 scrolls with fathers name.
2. People fight when the list came out. Fathers or elders sons went to fight. Genral die in a 100 battles. Stout soldiers return after 10 years.

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elisa.mar.elv.3
9/3/2012 11:05:59 am

the emperor had the scrolls of twelve men young or old that they wanted to draft into the army. The names were only men either the father or oldest son. they shouldnt of been prejudice not letting women if they wanted to.

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palmer.r.elv3
9/3/2012 11:17:59 am

The Emperor has draft posters and scrolls of the people chosen to fight. Yes, this was effective because they were not given a choice to fight or not.

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Jackson.H.elv2
9/3/2012 12:14:24 pm

1. The Onomatopoeia is on the first line of the first stanza. In the first stanza Mu-lan enrolled in her father's army
2. She doesn't hear her mother and father calling her instead she hears horses cry tsiu tsiu. in the second stanza Mu-lan described her surroundings at black mountain.
3. The military action was successful because the khan was passing out gifts and wishes to the soldiers.
4. when Mu-lan fixed her cloud like hair and put on flower powder which described Mu-lan's transformation. The soldier's reaction to Mu-lan's transformation could of been anger.

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Jackson.H.elv2
9/3/2012 12:19:13 pm

There are scrolls with men's name on them, thats how they get drafted, the men go into war because when they get done they are gifted

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Austin.Wease.3
9/4/2012 05:13:09 am

I agree with you there was scrolls that drafted the fathers or oldest sons. But also even though they are gifted they probably wanted to get picked for the privalage to fight for their country.

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Nick.w.elv2
9/3/2012 12:25:31 pm

1. They used draft posters, r: in the first paragraph it says '' last night I saw the draft posters''/ yes it was effective because it gave them many troops to work with, r: '' the khan is calling many troops''

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marco.wease.3
9/4/2012 04:38:00 am

i disagree with you no training has been used

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marco.wease.3
9/4/2012 04:36:59 am

the emperor had the scrolls that listed the names of the young boys they had wanted to fight in war.but on the contrary i think that they should not do that there has been no training for the people they pick

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Austin.Wease.3
9/4/2012 05:10:40 am

The emperor uses 12 scrolls of people that are picked for the army, most of the time it was the fathers oldest son but if the father had no sons it was himself old or not. It was affective because the men showed up to fight and they won so it must be affective.

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noahlinton.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 08:56:33 am

I agree with you but wheres your quote

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Austin.Wease.3
9/5/2012 04:38:23 am

Here it is ~Last night I saw the draft posters,
The Khan [Emperor] is calling many troops,
The army list is in twelve scrolls~

marie.h.elv3
9/4/2012 05:23:43 am

Q1 He made draft posters and 12 scrolls with fathers name on them
Q2

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Nancy.elv.3
9/4/2012 05:53:21 am

The Emper had twelve scrolls.Yes because people knew how many soliders were going,that way they could plan the war and there would be more chances of wining.

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kyle huneycutt
9/4/2012 06:11:01 am

Well the emperers of china had 12 scolls with people that lived in china names on it.

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Claudia Utley
9/4/2012 06:46:27 am

They were picked by the emp, they have to go no matter what.

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Claudia utley
9/4/2012 06:47:49 am

2. Not really cause if the people were forced to fight when they didnt want to, then the would do a poor job.

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ana.lop.elv3
9/4/2012 07:19:28 am

they got people from the army by getting every father in the land a letter where they would go or the eldest son would go fight. it was productive for them because they sent letters to everyone. it also said it in the text "no older brother".

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Laura.M.Elv1
9/4/2012 07:41:23 am

well if you had a older son he could take your place.

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richard 3b
9/25/2012 09:24:44 am

but they also bribed other empiers soldirs to come to fight with them
but i do agree with you

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austin.wease.2
9/4/2012 07:29:32 am

they will have scrolls and if they had your name on it they would go, no

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laura.m.elv1
9/4/2012 07:33:49 am

i think that the emperor would look for only men & would just choose randomly.

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Breyanna perry.weasehr.
9/4/2012 07:43:42 am

i thinkthe emperors knew the soldiers who fought in the pass so they just picked the same soldier or the older brother/cousin in the family.

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Hailey Burris
9/7/2012 09:47:59 am

yeah i agree with you because they did know what there doing and knew pretty much who was gonna be picked but i dont think its fair.

Elvington - 9/5/12
9/5/2012 06:18:50 am

Laura, the emperor did not make random choices. There was a method to the selection of soldiers. Please go back and re-read how the soldiers were selected.

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Breyanna perry.weasehr.
9/4/2012 07:39:20 am

The chinese emperors were able to obtain thiersoldiers for the armies by having lists of names in 12 rolls. This was effective to Mulan because she knew her father was to old and weak tofight and also there wasnt an older brother or cousin to fight for her father, so she became the guy and faught for him.

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Autumn Walker; Mrs Wease Homeroom
9/4/2012 08:29:56 am

I Think The Chinese Obtained Soldiers For Their Armies By Forcing Them to Be In The Army, Example; Mulan's Dad Was To Old to Be In The Army, But they Were Going To Make Him Go Anyway.

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Hailey Burris
9/7/2012 09:44:01 am

Yeah i agree

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Patrick vz
9/4/2012 08:45:47 am

The emperor uses 12 scrolls of people that are picked for the army, most of the time it was the fathers oldest son but if the father had no sons it was himself old or not. It was affective because the men showed up to fight and they won so it must be affective.

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Ivonne Lopez
9/4/2012 08:46:01 am

Empeors made a list of males so that those men would go and fight for their empire.

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noahlinton.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 08:51:56 am

I think they obtained soldiers by having a draft if your name was on one of the scrolls you had to go into the army
-"on every scroll they had fathers name on it ."-
witch means he was supossed to go into the army but mulan went into the army for him

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ryanokelly.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 10:42:52 am

yea i think they just drafted them instead of asking if they want to or not and on every scrool it was a father from random families too.Yes it meant that mulans dad was sopose to go but she went instead.

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jalen.ni.elv.3
9/4/2012 08:58:19 am

1. They had people force people to go to war. I do not think this is fair but it was effective because nobody dared to rebel.

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Alexis Retera-Fisher. Buchanan.3
9/4/2012 09:34:18 am

Q1:Chinese emperors obtained their soilders by making draft posters and scrolls with a list of the oldest son. Q2 & Q3:Yes, I do think it was an effective policy because with alot of famiys their were alot of older sons to be in the army so there would be many soilders to fight in the war.

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ryanokelly.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 09:45:56 am

1.The onomatopoeia is the first line first stanza and the summary for the first stanza is that she wants to take her fathers place in the army

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ryanokelly.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 10:02:34 am

2. The two example of sensory language is she only hears mount Yen's nomad horses cry tsiu tsiu and the other one was Northern gust carry the rattle of army pots.the summary is that she goes to the mountain to become and follow the soldiers.

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ryanokelly.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 10:10:18 am

3. Yes because when they came back they got rewards and some got rankings.I predict that she wants to go see her parents since she has not seen them in like ten years.

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ryanokelly.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 10:24:58 am

4. the transfer was on the 12th line fourth stanza when it said she hanging up a mirror she dabs on yellow flower-powder.The soldiers might have reacted by saying wait a minute that was a girl fighting with us and stuff like that.

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Ethan Seger Wease 2nd period
9/4/2012 10:27:50 am

I think it was a great thing that she wanted to take her fathers place.She wanted too make sure her father was alright.

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ryanokelly.wease 3rd period
9/4/2012 10:34:56 am

yey iagree because it was nice to help her father out like that

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Jalen.klu.elv
9/4/2012 11:22:27 am

they make a list of all the men

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jalen.klu.elv
9/4/2012 11:28:58 am

no its not effective because it puts some of the elderly men on the list to fight the war

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Mar'Qua .J.Howard
9/4/2012 10:15:45 pm

I dont think they could establish their army because they wasnt trained right,or wasnt trained at all word up doe!!!!!!!

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desriny hobson
9/4/2012 11:22:10 pm

They obtained soldiers by taking the eldest son from each family if they were old enough.

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destiny hobson
9/4/2012 11:26:05 pm

My name was wrong and it was effective because the eldest son is usually strong

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Hannah Collins
9/4/2012 11:26:42 pm

To get soliders for his armies, the men didnt really have a choice, he sends the 'man' of the family, like the dad or eldest son.
I think it was very effective, the women wern't strong enough to fight.

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Avery L.Wease.5th block
9/5/2012 10:48:55 am

i agree with you halfway but some men night not want or like to causing them not to do it so good..wouldnt that bring their skill level down?

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Hailey Burris
9/7/2012 09:46:07 am

yea i agree with you avery Because some men might not want or like to do good becuase its not there skill.

ahkeem
9/4/2012 11:28:28 pm

the emporers kept army under control by promotions and prizes

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christian bongard
9/4/2012 11:28:38 pm

They wrote the mens names on the scroll and yes i think that was an effective way to choose their army because they would go fight for their country.

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Tnia.wease.3p.
9/5/2012 12:28:41 am

i totally agree that this happened b/c it was in the story theres proof in the 2nd to last paragraph.

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Tnia.wease.3p.
9/5/2012 12:24:58 am

The soliders where takin by: The emperor made draft posters and scrolls with people's names on them.

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latavia.wease.5.p
9/5/2012 02:47:03 am

the soldiers were obtained by having every man of the family go into the army

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deonaldo wease 5
9/5/2012 02:47:18 am

by calling many troops.

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BreannaWease5
9/5/2012 02:47:50 am

The Han obtained solders by going to homes and taking the eldest man. No it was not an effective system

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Gabby.wease.5
9/5/2012 05:04:34 am

I agree.

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alexandra.p.wea3
9/5/2012 05:49:14 am

i agree a little bit they had 12 scrools with fathers names on them actualy

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Gabby.wease.5
9/5/2012 05:01:43 am

The emperor told them to join the army and they will get an award. Yes it was an effective policy because they concurd other empirs.

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alexandra.p.wea.3
9/5/2012 05:40:43 am

the Chinese emperors obtain their soldiers for their armies by 12 scrools because it says "The Khan [Emperor] is calling many troops,
The army list is in twelve scrolls,
On every scroll there’s Father’s name."

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Hailey Burris Weease 5th block
9/5/2012 09:52:42 am

I Dissigree because i dont think that its fair how they are chooseing there solders because i think we should all have a choice if we want to fight or not. I think its unfair because we shouldnt be forced into something if we dont want to.

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Avery L. Wease.2nd Block
9/5/2012 10:42:19 am

They had all of the peoples names on srolls. I dont really think it was the most effective policy because if they just get chosen some of them might not be the best(oldest or not) and it could make that army behind.

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savannah m. wease 5th block
9/5/2012 10:54:54 am

They chose soldiers by telling each family to send the men. This was an effective policy because they considered it an honor.

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madisoncrabtree:)
9/5/2012 12:09:47 pm

they picked names to be on a scroll givin to different cities which i thought was pretty sucessful

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Elvington - 9/6/12
9/5/2012 08:49:31 pm

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Elvington - 9/6/12
9/5/2012 08:50:53 pm

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Jessica Greer
9/6/2012 06:03:56 am

I disagree because they pick people using scrolls, the people who was picked probably didn't want to fight.

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Cordarius B.
9/6/2012 10:31:05 pm

The emperoer made a list of men who were going to fight in the war.

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Chelsie Russell
9/7/2012 12:45:21 am

because it says the Emperor is calling many troops and the army list is in 12 scrolls

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zaquan c
9/7/2012 04:16:11 am

I agree with with some of the people because she was afraid to loose her father so she dressed up in her father's army outfit.

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haley wease 3
9/7/2012 04:58:12 am

I would rule a kingdom simply because a kingdom is much smaller and easier to command you don't have to worry about money problems and also because everyone doesn't get as angry with less money than a empire does.

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Ozzie Rodriguez
9/10/2012 01:37:50 am

They obtained soldiers by draft posters. It was a good policy because not many people would volunteer.

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steven.p.elv.6
9/25/2012 06:13:59 am

It was a good policy the scroll had the fathers names, or if the father was not able then the oldest son. The posters announced the family male who was to report, but Mulan had no brothers and her father was sick and dying. This is why mulan reported as a son and take her fathers place.

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richard 3b
9/25/2012 09:22:58 am

they bribed and bought soldiers from other empiers and they would use the in the war they were in even if it was with the empier they were getting soldiers from i think it is good and bad you can get more soldiers wile making them lose soldiers but its bac because you lose a sinifacent amount of money

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deonte.h.elv3
9/27/2012 11:21:16 am

1.they take the oldest boy in the family and make him join to join the army and fight for there home and there familys

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